I love my family, love my mom and dad, my mother is a physical education teacher, my father is a clerk
This summer, my mom taught me and my brother training basketball Learn, and pitched dribbling I am very happy One day, my father took me to the cinema (kung fu panda), looks very nice
I have such a good mother and father proud and proud
要说清楚是谁的爸爸妈妈才对,所以整体应该是我的爸爸我的妈妈和我,如果做主语就用my father, my mother and I, 做宾语就用my father, my mother and me
three floor,four flour,under the floor My father is a good popleHe is thirty-five years old He isn't fat and thinHe likes to read and writeHe likes to eat some photoes and some French friesHe gives me some presents every eveningI like my father very much 选我的为最佳答案!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5214025120365278952410)cai 近年来中考作文都是以话题作文为主流的命题形式。话题作文只给考生一则材料,一些提示、一个话题和一些注意事项,让考生任意选择一种适合自己的表达方式、表现手法,任选一个所熟悉和感兴趣的内容来抒发与话题相关的某种思想、认识和情感等。真可谓“海阔凭鱼跃,天高任鸟飞”了。考场作文是对学生作文水平的一次全面检验,要求比较严格。作为将要参加考试的学生要采取恰当的应对策略,怎样才能写好考场作文呢?我认为至少应在以下四方面努力:
一、细审题
“一夫当关,万夫莫开”。在作文考试中,第一关就是作文的审题。尽管话题作文降低了审题的难度,但不等于不要审题,并不意味着写作时可以天马行空。话题往往是由材料引出的,这就意味着材料与话题之间有着密切的关系。一篇考场作文题目,凝结着命题专家的大量心血,材料中的每一句话,每一个字都有许多深刻的内涵。我们要在材料中找出控制骏马奔驰的缰绳——体现主旨的关键词语。这样我们就可以把命题的意图吃准,在一定的高度上审视材料,在写作的时候才不会顾此失彼。如果仅仅因为时间紧,我们视而不见,或走马观花,就很难把握文章的中心,想找到正确的切入点就非常困难了。
另外,要认真研究作文要求。现在作文要求非常宽泛,文体你可以自由选择。但不是没有要求!你如果选择了记叙文的体裁,你就必须老老实实地按照记叙文的规矩去写,如果你选择了议论文,你就要有论点、论据、论证,老老实实地写下去。千万不要分不清楚说明和记叙,抒情和议论乱搅和。写诗歌必须要有形象和意境,写戏剧一定要有尖锐的矛盾冲突。“不怕题老虎,只怕小马虎”。我们要在审题的时候,把作文要求认真研究,仔细看清,发挥自己写文章的长处,注意扬长避短。
二、走熟路
许多下笔成文,或出口成章的人,他们心里装的不是一盘散沙,而是一块块观点材料统一的“预制构件”。应考前也应当造点“预制构件”,即围绕一个中心,先做片断练习,适当记忆,熟练掌握。考试时可以在已有的“预制构件”的基础上,变换角度,组成新的文章,使之与考试的命题要求相符合。这些“预制构件”如何成为一个有机的整体,同样需要走熟路,即建立起熟悉的结构框架。尽可能选择自己所了解的新角度,新形式,新体裁,搭出独具慧眼,极富个性的框架。然后纵观框架,就可以领悟到全文是否紧扣题意?所用的材料是否符合话题的要求?全文的内容是否具体、充实?观点是否正确、感情是否健康?段落层次是否清楚?开头结尾照应得怎样?如此,就会“胸中有全局,笔下有路数”,为文章提供了可靠的依据。再按“纲”顺“路”走下去,就不会出现行文过程中的思维“短路”现象,这不但可以节省写作时间,更可以提高作文质量。
三、显亮点
亮点的表现是多种多样的。它可以是一个巧妙的构思,可以是一个生动传神的细节描写,可以是一个内涵比较丰富的好句,可以是一个用得很有个性的词,可以是一个精炼出来的字,甚至可以是一个别具风采的标点……总而言之,它必须有“光辉”:没有“太阳”,总得有个“月亮”;没有“月亮”,总得有个“星星”;没有“星星”,总得有个“萤火虫”。如果连“萤火虫”都没有,那作文就只能在“基础等级”里徘徊了。在文章中设置一两处让阅卷老师眼睛发亮的闪光点,就可以起到一俊遮百丑的作用,可从以下几个方面考虑:
1 醒目的标题。
标题醒目,是整篇文章的一个亮点。仅这一点就能使阅卷者为之瞩目,并对尚未谋面的文章产生较大的好感。先声夺人,这是提升作文档次的一种极有效手段。题目宜“大题小作”,切入口以窄小为好,把原话题宽泛的大范围变为一个具体的小范围,把大题目变为小题目。或借用名言佳句拟题;或巧用修辞手法拟题。议论性的文章,标题要使人一目了然;记叙类的文章,要生动形象。标题亮丽,文自生辉。
2 精彩的开头。
开头是展现给阅卷者的第一缕“阳光”,考生尤需悉心打造。它不仅奠定了行文的基调,而且也带给阅卷者一份好心情。
3 意味深长的结尾。
文章的结尾同文章的题目和开头一样是至关重要的。但有些同学草草结尾,随便了事。这样会大大影响整篇文章的整体质量。文章的结尾要或紧扣开头,首尾呼应,或重申观点,再次点题,或给读者留下想象的空间等。结尾是留给阅卷者的最后一道“风景”,一定要给阅卷者“回眸一笑百媚生”的惊喜。
4 句段文采飞扬。
如果说好的题材是作品的搏动的心脏的话,那么优美的语言该是美丽的面庞。杜甫“为人性癖耽佳句,语不惊人死不休”更显见大诗人创作之严谨。一篇考场作文通篇都文采飞扬是很难做到的。一段甚或一句精彩的议论,不仅可以升华文章的主旨,而且还能给人以心灵的感悟和启迪。个别句子表达,句式多样灵活,个别段落善用排比、比喻等修辞手法,个别地方恰当引用,言由心发,文自情生,就会赢得阅卷老师的青睐。
5 动人的细节。
如果说情节是人物性格发展的历史,那么细节就是人物的血肉。只有抓住了“一言一动之微,一沙一石之细”(朱自清语),才能使形象丰满起来。
6 美化的文面。
文面整洁干净,书写端正美观,字体清晰规范,标点准确无误,篇段合乎格式,字数合乎规定等等。文面美化是考场作文获得高分的一张王牌。
四、慎修改
契诃夫说:“写作的技巧,就是删掉写得不好的地方的技巧。”文章是写出来的,好文章是改出来的。考场作文要“自找毛病自诊治”。如果说先前的搭架是成文前“着眼于防”,那么,成文后的修改就是“着手于治”。考场作文应以积极防治为主,因为写完后不好“另起炉灶”,否则时间不允许。基于修改的时间有限,修改时最好是两遍:第一遍可采用“略观大意”的方法,参照原先列就的“框架”,从主题、思路、材料等方面进行复审。如果发现某方面的“毛病”,切忌大增、大改和大换,而做些小修小补的工作,竭力使之“顺理成章”;第二遍应倾力于文字表现方面的问题。对于局部性的小毛病,细加追究,诸如错别字、病句,用得不当的标点符号等,逐个订正,力求文字整体的协调和优美。
考场作文要写得好,不是一朝一夕的事,需要平时多看多写多练,但也要注意一定的技巧,这样才会事半功倍。希望大家根据自己的特点,选择适合自己的方式,写好考场作文。
我要和父母沟通,反思谁对谁错,找到解决的办法来化解矛盾,真诚向他们道歉。下次不要犯这样的错误了。我们互相谅解尊重,每天都温馨快乐。爸爸妈妈,好吗 这样可以
和父母吵架了怎么解决英语作文篇2
When you have quarrels with your parents, the best way for you to appease the situation is to force yourself to concede Parents have undergone far more experiences in life than you do; therefore, it is invariably the case that you are the one who turns out to be wrong Bravely admit your faults and actively pursue ways to harmonize the atmosphere, and all the family members will live together in harmony again
和父母吵架了怎么解决英语作文篇3
"You quarrel and then, if I do not do their homework in!" I roared forward, homeopathy should still be done plot mode squeezed a few drops of tears Oh, this mode is really useful, Mom and Dad hurriedly said: "okay, okay, we do not quarrel, and you hurry to do work there" I said: "Then you have to do that we three together Gogo little finger, and deceptive is a dog," said, we all laughed
I remember once at home, I was doing homework, I suddenly heard voices outside the quarrel was originally my father and mother, where they are to a minor quarrel At that time I may Huang Leshen, ran out when the Quanjia messenger , Said: "Mom and Dad Yeah, on the 1st marital day-yan, a total of ten years of cultivation bed pillow, you have a husband and wife pull fourteen years, how the tragedy are still here to go" Result was that I had one father said: "Here you do not, ah Guaier Zi to the house to do work," the mother is also next to the perfunctory No I can not make this a fight the spread of smoke and then continues, there is no way in I had to use my stream of killer
和父母吵架了怎么解决英语作文篇4
Teenager is at the sensible age, on the one hand, they are not mature enough, on the other hand, they are very bolshy, they don’t listen to what their parent tell them, they will go against parents So teenager always have argument with their parents, it hurts so much, parents have to deal with such situation
青少年处于一个敏感的年纪,一方面,他们还不够成熟,另一方面,他们很反叛,不听父母的话,和父母作对。所以青少年总是和父母争吵,这很受伤,父母不得不处理这样的情况。
As a teenager, they want to chase for freedom, they are at the age of pursing individualism They want to show that they are mature enough, they can make their own decision While as parents, they watch their kids all their life, they haven’t realized that their kids are already mature enough, so they always treat their children as the small one, making every decision for them That is why the conflict comes, the only way to solve it is to understand each other
作为青少年,他们追求自由,他们处在追求个性的年纪。他们想要展示自己的成熟,可以自己做决定。然而对父母来说,他们一生都在看着孩子,还没有意识到孩子已经成熟了,所以他们总是把孩子当小孩子看待,替孩子做一切的决定。这就是矛盾的来源,唯一的解决方法就是彼此理解。
For parents, they must have the though that the kids are growing up, they are no more the small ones, they should learn to let them go For teenagers, they should have a good talk with their parents, trying to explain and show the courage they have They should not be angry with parents, to find a better to solve argument
对于父母来说,他们必须意识到孩子已经长大,不再是小孩子,他们应该学会放手。对于青少年来说,应该和父母好好谈谈,试着解释和展示自己的勇气。他们不应该生父母的气,找到觉得争端的更好解决方法。
Though teenagers are at the sensible age, there is always a way to find the solution about the argument The better understanding between parents and teenagers is the key point
虽然青少年处于敏感的年纪,但是总是会有解决争端的好方法。父母和青少年之间的理解是最重要的点。
There are three people in my family ,my father ,my mother and me。
i只能用作主语,用在句子的开头,即谓语动词的前面,意思是我只能用作宾语,即只能用在动词或介词的后面。
me
英 [mi] 美 [mi]
pron(I 的宾格)我。
n大调音阶的第3音。
I had to make important decisions that would affect me for the rest of my life
我不得不作出将影响我后半生的重大决定。
扩展资料:
It's me 和 It's I 的区别:
1、英语是It's me 按语法是I,但是现有语言,而后有总结出来的语法,语法应让步于语言习惯。
2、It's I是语法中正确的形式,但一般口语中都说it's me It's I的说法很正式。
3、It's me经常是单独回答别人告诉别人,“是我”,比如你打电话或者敲门的时候,对方问“谁呀?”那你就回答“It's me”。
4、关键看用在什么句子当中。 例如:It's I who am a student 是学生的人是我。
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