请英语高手帮我看下英语作文

首先，Materialism相对的词通常是Idealism

浪漫主义用Romanticism，相对的词通常是 Realism。

其次，地道英语作文最好少用包含很多从句的长句，因为读者难以理解主体。所以通过合理断句和改变主语让意思层层递进。

还有，时态统一。叙事用过去，评论用现在。

最后，可以省略的从句代词和动词，省略之，简化句子。

In the recent popular show about looking for life partner which named “If You Are the One”, a female guest whose name is Ma Nuo said, she would rather choose to cry in BMW than to laugh on the bike

改成：Recently, there was a popular show called “If You Are the One” The show was about looking for life partners One the show, a female guest named Ma Nuo said she would rather cry on a BMW than laugh on a bike

Nowadays, material concerns are more important than romance in a relationship leads to marriage

修改：material issues（concern有担心的意思，issue比较中性，表示和婚姻有关的事情或主题） are often considered （这样写比较客观，毕竟这句话并不是所有人赞同）more important than romantic relationships（lead to marriage可以不要，因为谁都知道，而且打破比较句的parallelism）

Although many young people who influence by romantic ideals may disagree, I think that when romance meets materialism, the final winner will belong to materialism The reasons can be listed as follows:

修改：are influenced by

I think改成I believe，因为think语气太弱了，I think在英语里和没有没什么区别。

the final winner will be materialism，因为belong to只表示所有格的意思，没有be的意思。

My reasons are listed as follows，因为can be有点奇怪，are直接了当。

先写这些，后面的等你看完了上面的hi我

To put it simply, is a neoclassical model of ancient Greece and Rome for the content of the unity of beauty and formal beauty In the classical, where the objects described in the basic wisdom is pretty strong Romanticism and realism are the same strain Romanticism of the word, such as the origin of the first floor said the Roman The basic meaning of the word is impossible to tell a story This constitutes a form of content is greater than For example, Notre Dame's Quasimodo, I personally think that Zhuangzi write those strangely shaped body of the Romantic Road are also the image Romantic realism in relation to content and form of the unity in reality It is different from the classical description of the object can be ugly, as long as is true Zola to become a reality there, and can be used to write n pages of a woman's buttocks Seeking to achieve the effect of painting and even anatomymodernism is

清教主义 Puritanism

浪漫主义 Romanticism

Romanticism was a movement in literature， philosophy， music and art which developed in Europe in the late 18th and early 19th centuries Starting from the ideas of Rousseau in France and from the Storm and Stress movement (狂飙运动) in Germany Romanticism emphasized individual values and aspirations (灵感) above those of society As a reaction (反应) to the industrial revolution (工业革命)， it looked to (承上启下) the Middle Ages and to direct contact with nature (与大自然的直接接触) for inspiration (灵感)。 Romanticism gave impetus (动力支持) to the national liberation movement (民族解放运动) in 19th century Europe

启蒙运动 Enlightenment Movement

Enlightement was an intellectual (知识分子) movement originating in France， which attracted (吸引) widespread (普遍的) support (支持) among the ruling (统治阶级) and intellectural classes of Europe and North America in the second half of the 18th century It characterizes the efforts (作用) by certain European writers to use critical reason (批评推理) to free minds from prejudice (偏见)， unexamined authority (权威) and oppression (压迫) by Church or State (国家政权)。 Therefore the Enlightenment is sometimes called the Age of Reason (理智的年代)。

浪漫，意为纵情；浪漫；富有诗意，充满幻想；不拘小节（常指男女关系而言）。此词来自于西方词语Romantic音译的演变而成，其作用就是为了翻译Romantic。至于说出自宋·苏轼《与孟震同游常州僧舍》诗之一：“年来转觉此生浮，又作三吴浪漫游。”中的“浪漫”二字，并不是一个词语，而是两个并列字，诗中此二字的意义与现在浪漫一词的意思不同。

中文名

浪漫

外文名

Romantic

拼音

làng màn

注音

ㄌㄤˋ ㄇㄢˋ

基本解释

(1) [romantic]

(2) 富有诗意,充满幻想。

我的想法也许有点浪漫。

(3) 行为放荡,不拘小节(常指男女关系而言)。

他们的关系太浪漫了。

引证解释

1 纵情，任意。

宋·苏轼《与孟震同游常州僧舍》诗之一：“年来转觉此生浮，又作三吴浪漫游。”

宋曾巩《送郭秀才》诗：“当今文人密如栉，子勿浪漫西与东。”

2 犹烂漫。

宋·张镃《过湖至郭氏庵》诗：“山色稜层出，荷花浪漫开。”

3 [英Romantic]富有诗意，充满幻想。

英文中也有 Romance一词，而浪漫主义一词即来源于传奇一词，中世纪的骑士传奇与浪漫主义有直接的渊源关系。18世纪英国的感伤主义文学和卢梭对感情抒发的崇尚，为19世纪浪漫主义文学的兴起和繁荣铺平了道路。

鲁迅《二心集·对于左翼作家联盟的意见》：“革命尤其是现实的事，需要各种卑贱的，麻烦的工作，决不如诗人所想象的那般浪漫。”老舍《二马》第五段二：“你老说我太注重事实吗，我得学着浪漫一点，是不是？”冰心《寄小读者》二十：“轻柔的笑声，从水面，从晚风中传来，非常的浪漫、潇洒。”

4 引申指风流，不拘小节(多指男女关系而言)。

曹禺《日出》第二幕：“你真是个杰作！又香艳，又美丽，又浪漫，又肉感。”《花城》1981年第6期：“不过是一个浪漫轻浮而又不负责任的异国女郎，能够及时地摆脱正是自己的幸运。”

5 指唐元结 。

清·沉树本《大水叹》诗之五：“长歌《舂陵行》，千载思浪漫 。”原注：“元结称 浪叟 ，亦称漫叟。《舂陵行》，元结忧民诗也。”参见“浪翁”。

浪漫方式

女生渴望浪漫，渴望生活中经常出现小说、**里的镜头，但这种期待往往令人失望。中国男人要么不会浪漫，要么不想浪漫，要么环境氛围不让浪漫。这真“熬” 苦了红颜们的一厢甜心思。

既然“浪漫尚未成功”，作为“主体”的女生就“仍需努力”。下面五招“宅式”浪漫，不妨试试：

第一招：温柔接触

年轻伴侣容易迷恋床上的快感，以至于忽略了床外的接触。其实这种接触可以产生更大的浪漫能量。

养成这种习惯也很简单，比如在男人看电视时给他作简单的头部按摩，或者在他出门时用双臂从背后抱住他，嗲几句。或者帮他调整领带时轻轻拥吻一下。这些举手之劳，会加强彼此的亲密感，同时让你的男人身心愉快。

第二招：主动回应

时下男人累，女人也累。但女人再累，也不要忘记主动回应这件事。比如男人今天办成了一件事，或多赚点外快，他回家时心情一定很好，他如果在厨房里抱你、吻你，你即使心情再糟，即使双手沾满油渍，也要扬起脸来，给他一个微笑的回应。

这与你“去去去，烦着哪”的回答，绝对是天壤之别。因为不管怎么说，最终帮忙和解决你心烦的，还是你的男人。他给你的理解、支持是最重要的，其它都是次要的。

第三招：性感歌舞

其实这招是老土的“夫唱妇随”，我们给它加进一些时尚的元素。如果条件许可，往碟机里放块探戈或迪斯科，两个人或疾或徐地跳跳舞，女生可暴露点，身体贴紧自己的男人点，这种另类娱乐也可激发爱欲。居家条件不允许，不妨约上三五好友上K厅，在昏暗迷离的灯光下，与自己的男人“敖包相会”一下，“欧耶”一下，跳几曲贴面舞，效果很佳。

第四招：起个昵称

有研究表明，女生在与男生交谈中，经常叫他的名字，对方会倍感亲切。现在你能不能再进一步，给自己的伴侣起个昵称这东西要求准确、亲昵，不在乎粗俗与否，当然，文雅一点更好。比如有个女人，叫她的爱侣为主人，“主人，我回来了”、“主人，我想要了”，多动听啊。

你也可叫你的伴侣蜜蜂、公牛、豹子、三哥、大头什么的，昵称因人而异，叫上了就要亲切地经常地叫。告诉你吧，昵称是一种专利，专属一个深爱男人的女人，不可山寨，不可盗版。

意思是即使已经年迈也要懂得享受生活。

宋苏轼《与孟震同游常州僧舍》诗之一：“年来转觉此生浮，又作三吴浪漫游。”

宋曾巩《送郭秀才》诗：“当今文人密如栉，子勿浪漫西与东。”

宋张镃《过湖至郭氏庵》诗：“山色稜层出，荷花浪漫开。”

英文中也有 Romance一词，而浪漫主义一词即来源于传奇一词，中世纪的骑士传奇与浪漫主义有直接的渊源关系。18世纪英国的感伤主义文学和卢梭对感情抒发的崇尚，为19世纪浪漫主义文学的兴起和繁荣铺平了道路。

鲁迅《二心集·对于左翼作家联盟的意见》：“革命尤其是现实的事，需要各种卑贱的，麻烦的工作，决不如诗人所想象的那般浪漫。”

老舍《二马》第五段二：“你老说我太注重事实吗，我得学着浪漫一点，是不是？”

冰心《寄小读者》二十：“轻柔的笑声，从水面，从晚风中传来，非常的浪漫、潇洒。”

美国浪漫主义的英文是：American Romanticism

例句：

The causes of the rise of American romanticism are various

美国浪漫主义文学兴起的历史背景复杂多样。 扩展资料

　Edgar Allan Poe was an American romanticism writer in the 19th century

　爱论·坡是一位美国十九世纪浪漫主义文学家。

　Meanwhile, Americanism sets a heavy cultural foundation for American romanticism with its own national characteristics

　同时，美国方式也为美国浪漫主义文学奠定了美国民族特有的深厚文化底蕴。

　Nathaniel Hawthorne is a romanticism representative writer of American in 19th century

　纳撒尼尔·霍桑是19世纪美国浪漫主义的代表作家。

american romanticism is one of the most important periods in the hisory of american literature

it was a rebellion against the objectivity of rationalismfor romantics,the feelings ,intuitions and emotions were more important than reason and common sense they emphasized individualism,placing the individual against thegroupthey affirmed the inner life of the self, and cherished strong interest in the past,the wild,the romotethe mysterious ans the strangethey stressed the element americanness in their works

it started with the publication of washington irving's the sketch bool and ended of american literatureit is also called the american renaissance

american romanticists include such literary figures as washington irvingralph waldo emersonhenry david thoreau,william cullenbryant,henry wordsworth longfellow,nathaniel hawthorne,edgar allen poe ,herman melville,walt whitman and some others

2]]in the field of literature ,the enlightement movement brought about a revival of interest in the old classical works

the tendency is known as neoclssicismthe neoclaaicists held that forms of literature wer to be modeled after the classical works of the ancient greek and roman weiters such as homer and virgil and those of the contemporary french ones

they believed that the artistic ideals should be order,logic,restrained emotion and accuracy,and that literature should be judged in terms of its service to humanity

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about british romanticism

in the mid-18th century,a new literary movement called romanticism came to europe and then to england

it was characterized by a strong protest against the bondage of neoclassicism,which emphasized reason,order and elegant witinstead,romanticism gave primary concern to passion,emotion,and natkural beautysin the history of literature ,romanticism is generally regarded as the thought that designatesa literary and philosophical theory which tends to see the individual as the very center of all life and all experience

the english romantic period is an age of poetry major romantic poets include blake ,wordsworth,coleridge,byron,shelley and keatsromanticism prevailed in england from 1798 to 1837