初中英语作文 情感

母亲节我为母亲祈祷 How does a daughter begin to thank her mother for life itself For the love, patience and just plain hard work that go into raising a child For running after a toddler, for understanding a moody teenager, for tolerating a college student who knows everything For waiting for the day when a daughter realizes her mother really is Now that I am no longer young, I have friends whose mothers have passed away I have heard these sons and daughters say they never fully appreciated their mothers until it was too late to tell them How does a grown woman thank for a mother for continuing to be a mother For being ready with advice(when asked)or remaining silent when it is most appreciated For not saying:"I told you so", when she could have uttered these words dozens of times For being essentially herself －－loving, thoughtful, patient, and fiving I am blessed with the dear mother who is still alive I appreciate her more each day My mother does not change, but I do As I grow older and wiser, I realize what an extraordinary person she is How sad that I am unable to speak these words in her presence, but they flow easily from my pen　1yesterday was my birthday, so some of my clas ates sent me presents mother prepared a tea party for me i invited all of them to e and take part in itthe tea party began at half past six there were cold drinks and refreshments we ate, talked and laughed we felt that we were the happiest men in the world 昨天是我生日，所以有几位我的同班同学送我礼。母亲给我准备一个茶会。我邀请他们都前来参加。茶会下午六点半开始。有冷饮和点心。我们又吃又谈又笑。我们觉得是世界上最快乐的人。。 2i like the chinese new year better than any other festival this is a time especially for rest and joy i need not study i wear good clothes and eat good food i have a good time from morning till night i am as happy as a king 我喜欢中国新年比喜欢其它任何节日更甚。这是一个专为休息和欢乐的时间。我不需要读书。我穿好衣服，吃好东西。我每天从早到晚日子过得轻松愉快。我和上帝一样快乐。 3no sooner had the witer vacation begun than i returned to my native town of course i must make good use of it;in the morning i reviewed my lessons and read newspapers or magazines in the afternoon i played ball games with my friends or went fishing in the river at night i watched television with my family hardly had the clock on the wall struck ten when i went to bed 寒假刚一开始，我就回故乡了。自然我须好好利用它。 早晨我复习功课并阅读报纸或杂志。下午我和朋友打球，或去河中钓鱼。晚上我就和家人看看电视。墙上的钟刚敲十下，我就去睡觉了。

　　在那秋天最后的几个日子里，叶，簌簌落下，在空中悲歌而舞。偶尔，还有黄叶稀落在树上，憔悴出秋的冷漠与荒凉。

　　我的心，已早早地入了冬。

　　冷战，毫无商量地袭向我，已是第五天了，没有在一起吃饭，没有说一句话，甚至，连面也刻意躲避不见。父亲，突然间变得那样陌生，似乎与我越走越远……

　　模糊了，渐渐模糊了，好像不久前，父亲爸还在餐桌上笑着给我夹菜，还在电视前饶有趣味地跟我讨论着某某明星，还在……为什么？暖春突然遍野冰封？一切都变了，一个巴掌，一顿责备，竟这样禁锢着我，冰冻着我。再也没有像往常一样，听到父亲那越渐熟悉的车声，立即走向屋外蹦跳着奔向他；当那车声渐去，我会默默注视着那远去地背影……而现在，那车声，我仍会静静地听，脚步，却再也没有挪动。

　　放学了，我推着车走向院中，地上，枯叶随风悄然飘起，又凄然落下，院子里摆放着被砍回的枯芦竹。“咚、咚……”，只见一个蹲着的背影，哦，是父亲，在专注地将那芦竹砍成小段。我下意识地想要退去，然而，他似乎并未觉察继续劳作着。我停留下来，扶着车，站着，默默注视着：他依旧是那样，干活时总是穿着旧衣服，身上那件褐色地春秋衫，不知洗过多少次，透出点点漂白，越发褶旧。手中的那把斧头，不停歇地在空中划过一道道小小的半弧，那样娴熟，没有一丝倦累。“呼——”冷风吹过，吹乱了他的头发，蓬松的发丝，分明闪起点点银光。哦，我竟从来没有注意到，父亲的头发已白了许多！他所承受的艰辛，我竟丝毫未能体会……

　　不再任性，不再犹豫，不再躲避！我突然明白，纵使天下的父母对子女曾是多么的严厉、苛刻，那决不是出于厌恶，那都是因为爱着他们，父亲又何尝不是？他何尝不是每时每刻地为着自己的宝贝女儿着想？

　　心，豁然明亮了起来。秋阳，是如此明媚，如此温暖地环抱着我。我放下车，搬来一个小凳，快步走向爸爸，在他身后轻轻放下：“爸，坐吧！”在这突然间，他怔住了，却又很快地，我看到父亲脸上夹杂着激动与欣喜的浅浅笑容：“回来啦，快进屋，外面冷……”

　　秋，那样暖；心，那样暖。

　　我相信，在这快过去的秋与那未来的冬里，我会感到格外的温暖。

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情感： 1感情浓烈，如火山喷发，汩汩而出，能深深打动读者。

2感情真挚，情意浓浓，似香醇美酒，令人不饮而醉。

3情感真切自然，无矫揉造作之嫌，以平淡心现真实情。

4心里过程真实细腻，人物的想法、态度在读者面前一览无遗。

5感情真实细腻，言语感人至深，确是发自作者内心的肺腑之言。

6从自我反思中寻求人生得失，在悔悟中流露真情，字句铿锵有力，震撼人心。

⑴ 语言简朴，感情平淡，情意不够深切。

⑵ 感情过于浓烈，不似有感而发，反倒是搔首弄姿，自作多情。

⑶情感缺乏深度，未能以景传情，未能由事生情，感情虽潜藏于文中，但未能深入挖掘。

⑷心理刻画不够生动具体，未能有力地表现人物的思想、态度，好恶观。