帮忙续写英语作文。 一个爱情故事 高中必修三英语书第一单元的阅读是讲A Sad Love Stor

Now Li Fang found his girl friend Hujin was waiting for him, he suddently realized that he had mistaken the appointment's place 

He felt so sorry but he didn't how to do for he both had thrown the gifts away and been lated for the appointment 

At the same time, Hujin found that LiFang was besides the window She looked at Li's ambassrassing face and might know something 

She called LiFang and let him coming LiFang was shocked and hesitated from a moment, but he finally coming

写作能力

丰富学生词汇量，培养学生遣词造句的能力。

词汇是组成语言最基本的单位，是写作的必需材料。词汇量不足或掌握得不好，都会给写作带来困难。众所周知，作文是信息的输出，一定要以输入为前提。

只有头脑中储备有一定数量的词汇，才有可能写出好作文。因此，加强词汇教学、扩大和丰富学生的词汇量是提高学生写作能力的基础工作。

因而，在进行词汇教学时，教师应通过例句讲清楚常用词的意义、使用条件、用法及搭配关系，然后再让学生模仿造句。

此外，英语有自己的固定短语、固定搭配、特殊句型等，如果学生能在作文中恰到好处地使用它们，那将会大大地提高作文档次 。因此，平时必须加强这方面的基本训练，还要督促学生课后多多记忆。

-英语作文

Inorder to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted everypossible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light,colours, cartoon films and human performance For instance, toadvertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress tosit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fimehim or herrast 更多句型： To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example 二、做比较 方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的； 世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点（through parison）和不同点（through contrast）。下面是一些短语： 相似的比较： in parison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较： on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, pared with …, … 这个对 pare and contrast 题型很有用 三、换言之 没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。 实际就是重复重复再重复！下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you! I am enthusiastic about you That is to say, I love you I am wild about you In other words, I have fallen in love with you 或者上面我们举过的例子： I cannot bear it 可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it 因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it 更多短语： in more difficult language, in simpler 如果觉得好一定要分享。。。独乐乐不如人人乐。。。 Inorder to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted everypossible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light,colours, cartoon films and human performance For instance, toadvertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress tosit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fimehim or herrast 更多句型： To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example 二、做比较 方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的； 世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点（through parison）和不同点（through contrast）。下面是一些短语： 相似的比较： in parison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner　As far as I am concerned/In My opinoin就我而言last but not least 最后但不是不重要的frankly /generally speaking一般来说for the sake of出于对什么的考虑first /second/thirdfirstly/secondly/thirdly，这句话分条陈述时特有用，能较好的展现你清晰的观点、逻辑思维。。。。。。。。。。。。作文时要注意条理清晰，特别是第一句和最后一句要给改卷老师眼睛一亮的感觉切忌千万不要犯低级的时态，语法错误，这样无论你其余部分写的多好，档次都会低很多多读一些例文吧，会找到感觉的，Come on!!!~　yet this is not always the case yet this is just the case however,nowadays more and more/different people have different points when they are talking about they argue that some hold the view someothers we should attach more importance to 然而，这并非总是如此。 然而，这仅仅是如此。 然而，如今越来越more /不同的人有不同的点，当他们正在谈论 他们争辩说， 一些人士认为一些 其他 我们应该更加重视 一方面， 另一方面 只有这样，我们才能 我们可以安全地得出这样的结论 正如著名的有句古话 我们应当在深入调查 在一定程度上/在不同程度上 这项工作的关键问题在于 这个问题的答案是2倍 以, on one hand, on the other hand only then can we we may safely e to the conclusion that just as the famous saying goes we should probe it in depth to some extent/to varying degrees the key to this problem lies in the answer to this question is o folds as to ,　1 According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to oking 依照最近的一项调查，每年有4，000，000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。 2 The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework 最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。 3 No invention has received more praise and abuse than Inter 没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。 4 People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation 人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。 5 An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not plete with graduation 越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。 6 When it es to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study 说到教育，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。 7 Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person's physical fitness 许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。 8 Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international touri 应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。 9 An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who plain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution 越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而，越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法，他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题，像犯罪和卖*。 10 Many city residents plain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers 许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少，以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车，而车上可能已满载乘客。　Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities It is estimated that ( 1 ) Why have there been so many XX Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows The first one is that ( 2 ) Besides,( 3 ) The third reason is ( 4 ) To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( 5 ) It is high time that something were done upon it For one thing ,( 6 ) On the other hand ,( 7 ) All these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX

读后续写英语情感描写方法如下：

英语读后续写应该根据前面的文章内容来进行延伸，要通读全文，读懂原文，构思情节，谋篇布局，理清逻辑，优化语言。通读全文，读懂原文。搞清楚文章的人物，时间，地点，起因，发生的事情。把文章的意是读清楚，知道文章表达的意思。

英语读后续写技巧：首先构思故事情节，谋篇布局。在了解原文的基础上，构建故事的走向，用运自己的理解，谋划故事发展的方向和结局。

最后理清逻辑，组织语言。把要继写的情节和描写的场景条理化，按照事物发展的一般规律有条有理的续写。注意逻辑思维清晰，语言表述优美，同时表达完整不产生歧义，语句要通顺，语法要正确，单词拼写正确。

1、内容

在阅卷过程中，我们发现，一部分考生没有读懂原文，如不认识bear spray，不理解a bright red cloud enveloped the animal，没有理清人物关系，误认为Paul与Mac是好朋友：这部分考生由于阅读能力直接影响到续写的发挥。

2、语言

从评卷结果来看，考生出现的问题偏向于刻意追求运用高级、新颖的词汇，强行运用复杂句型等语法结构，而忽略了与原文语言环境的符合度和连贯度。