呵呵 广东考生 这部分的每个事例的字数大概80 - 100之间为佳 下面提供几个你参考一下 友谊类 There was a time when I was addicted to playing puter games, unwilling to spend time on study I was so absorbed that I did poorly in study Luckily, it was my friend Li Lei that noticed my problem and managed to prevent me from playing puter games In addition, he encouraged me to take part in some outdoor activities Eventually, I succeeded in quitting my addiction and devoted myself to study坚持类 Helen Keller, who was deaf and blind, managed to bee one of the most successful writers in the world As a child, she learned to spell and recognize word by word with the help of her teacher She overcame a great many difficulties to be able to read and write barely with her ffingers It was her perseverance and insistance that enabled her to bee one of the greatest women in the world目标类 There was a time when I got tired of study Unable to concentrate on my study, I often blanked out when reading a book Luckily, it was my partner who pointed out that it was mostly due to my lack of motivation and aim She encouraged me to find a goal, such as attending a key university or performing well in the ing exam Thanks to her, I regained my confidence and worked hard on my study对待失败的态度类 Once I failed in an important petition I was so upset that I began to doubt myself "Am I too stupid Am I not good enough to catch up with others" One day, I watched a movie called Forest Gump I was moved and inspired by Gump's insistance and optimi , therefore deciding that I should move on I began to pick up confidence and gradually, I made great progress团结类 There was a time when my team was asked to acplish an assignment by my teacher Not knowing how to do it, some of us worked separately while others just stood aside watching Gradually, those hard workers began to plain and those lazy ones continued to resist Luckily, it was my teaher who noticed our problem and showed us how to cooperate as a united team After dividing ourselves and assigning tasks clearly, we set about working immediately and finally, we were the first to acplish the task and did it well。
2 高中英语作文书信的模板Dear My Friend,
How are you Do you want to know about my English studyOK,I will tell you
I study English at Sunday afternoon at o o'clockI study JianQiao EnglishAnd,last Saterday I took part in the Public English TestI think I can passAnd,next Monday,my school will have an English words testI want to take part inI am sure,I can win
Well,it's lateIn the end of my letter,I put my best wishes for you!
Please write to me soon!
Yours,
Jackyanbo
这是范文
3 英语作文续写Task2: Talking on a given topic Direction: Describe an embarrassing situation in which you got very angry Task3: Role-playing Directions: The geology department of a major university is planning to admit 30 male and 5 female students However, the results of the college entrance examination show that by average, of all the applicants, females have scored higher than most males Should the department stick to its original plan Student A: You think the department should still stick to the original plan, and you should try to convince your partner Remember you should start the conversation Student B: You don't think the department should stick to the original plan, and you should try to convince your partner Remember your partner will start the conversation。
4 求高考英语作文素材例子70单词,范文10篇(希望能对楼主有所帮助)一:THE VALUE OF TIME 爱惜时光 An English proverb says that time is money I consider it (this) wrong Why Because we all know that we can earn money be work but can not in any way get back time (in anyway) For this reason, we may (can) say that time is more valuable than money Many people do not know the value of time It (this) is indeed a great pity We must bear (keep) in mind that wasting time is equal to wasting your life 英国有句谚语说,时间就是金钱。
我认为这是不对的。为什么?因为我们大家都知道我们能够用工作赚钱,但无论如何却无法把时间争取回来。
基于此种理由,我们可以说时间比钱钱更宝贵。 许多人不知爱惜时光。
这确实是可惜的。我们必须记住浪费时间等于浪费生命。
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 二:WHY SHOULD WE STUDY ENGLISH 为什么我们要学英文 If you want to ask me why we should study English, my answer will be simple and clear Now let me enumerate the reasons one by one in the followingIn the first place, English has bee an international language If you know English, you van make a trip round the world without being misunderstoodIn the second place, most valuable books, newspapers and magazines are written in English If you wish (hope) to get knowledge, you must learn English 如果你要问我们为什么我们要学英文。我的答复很简单明了。
现在让我来把我的理由一一列举在下面:英文已成为一种国际语言。如果你通晓它,你可以环游世界不会被人误解。
大多数有价值的书籍,报纸和杂志都是用英文写的。如果你希望获得知识,你必须学习英文。
三:MY BIRTHDAY 我的生日 Yesterday was my birthday, so some of my clas ates sent me presents Mother prepared a tea party for me I invited all of them to e and take part in itThe tea party began at half past six There were cold drinks and refreshments We ate, talked and laughed We felt that we were the happiest men in the worldTime passed quickly In a inkling, the clock on the wall struck nine We could not but say “Good-bye” to one another 昨天是我生日,所以有几位我的同班同学送我礼。母亲给我准备一个茶会。
我邀请他们都前来参加。茶会下午六点半开始。
有冷饮和点心。我们又吃又谈又笑。
我们觉得是世界上最快乐的人。时间过得很快。
转瞬间,墙上的钟敲九点了。我们不得不互道再见。
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 四:HOW TO SPEND SUNDAYS 如何消度星期日 Some of us always spend Sundays aimlessly We can seldom derive profits from the valuable hours (time) of Sundays This is indeed a great pity Though Sundays are set aside as a day for rest, we must make good use of themWe know that our school lessons are usually not sufficient We should often utilize Sundays to read reference books In this way we will increase our knowledge Besides, we must be engaged in sports or outing so as to strengthen our bodies 我们许多人终是把星期日毫无目的地消度掉。这确实是十分可惜。
我们很少能从星期日的宝贵时光中获得益处。虽然星期日是被指定为一个休息的日子,但是我们却应好好利用它。
我们知道我们学校的功课通常是不够的。我们应时常利用星期日来阅读参考书。
如此我们的知识就会增加了。此外,我们必须从事运动或郊游以便强壮我们的身体。
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 五:HONESTY IS THE BEST POLICY 诚为上策 There is an English proverb which says (saying) “Honesty is the best policy” It signifies the importance of honesty What are the benefits of honesty If you are honest to others, they will be honest to you in return When you are sad, they will fort you When you are in trouble, they will help you There is no enumerating the evils of dishonesty here In a word, a dishonest man will be looked down upon by others and (be) regarded as a public enemy 英国有一句谚语说“诚为上策”。它说明了诚的重要性。
诚的益处是什么?如果你对他人诚实,他们也会对你诚实作为报答。当你忧悉的时候,他们会安慰你。
当你是处在困难中的时候,他们会帮助你。 无法在这里数述不诚实的害处。
一言以蔽之,一个不诚实的人会被人看轻的而且被看作为一个公敌。 六:HOW EXERCISE HELPS 运动的利益 If our bodies are not strong, our spirit to do things will certainly be quite dull And at the same time, we are lack of energy (ies) to study Diseases will only attack the weak, but not the strong Why are our bodies not strong Because we do not pay attention to exercise For this reason, we students must often take different kinds (sorts) of exercise in the gym Exercise helps us (to) strengthen our bodies and avoid disease It also teaches us 。
5 人教版高中英语课本中的作文素材我的2010年运势,现在就测试!2009年01月22日想了很久不知道这个寒冬用什么来命名,我左思冥想,深怕自己那些知识都用不上,现在才知道什么叫书到用时方恨少,高中英语作文素材高中课本作文素材_岁寒四友。
我也能用这四个字来代替了"岁寒四友"。(我还深刻的记得这是一次去杭州植物园的时候拍的,抬头没有看见一束阳光,唯独那只有成群的竹林成片成片的掩盖着对方的叶子,没有一丝丝的退让~家乡也是这样的,前前后后就是竹子多,晚上风稍稍大点就可以听见竹子摇动的声音,在家就有了岁寒四友中的一样了)(这样作品我可是很开心得到的,因为这是我的好朋友包去采景的时候拍的,用8000多的相机拍出来的效果就是不一样啊,哈哈,梅花,俺很喜欢,梅花好像很长时间没有看到了,就是因为在上学,每次回家又不能看到,很可惜啊,但是很不后悔在这里,因为我家门前就是有梅花,梅花开的时候连家里都很香,这就是"近朱者赤,近墨者黑"了吧,虽然这个比喻有点小小的离谱)(其实菊花我在学校也是随处可见,但是我就是没有感觉,看到我家的菊花很茂盛时就会很开心,门前多了好多的朋友,菊花是早就有了,现。
6 中考英语作文续写The day before yesterday,my aunt who lives in the village call me and want me
to play a fun for some time,I promised without hesitationBecause that place was
my paradise at one time and I also missed my aunt very much
When I was a little boy,I went fishing, went shrimping and caught the cicada
with my brother and other little boys,we climbed the trees ,then we picked and
ate the mulberryFinally,we play a pee pee game, whose one was higher and who
won the game Funny! hehe! I really miss the days when I lived in my aunt's
home!
7 高中英语万能作文句子,作文模板以下大家整理出来了高考英语作文中的万能句子。对考生会有很大帮助的。
Recently, the problem of … has aroused people's concern 最近,……问题已引起人们的关注
The Inter has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well
互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题
Nowadays, (overpopulation) has bee a problem we have to face
如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了
It is monly believed that … / It is a mon belief that … 人们一般认为……
Many people insist that … 很多人坚持认为……
With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…
随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为……
8 高中英语作文素材高中英语写作-100篇一、写作 1、(1分)提示: 张楠的父亲有位美国同事,他的孩子约翰•史密斯即将来华。
约翰写信向张楠询问一些有关他所在城市的问题。张楠回信,内容如下: 得知约翰要来非常高兴。
告诉他可能遇到一些不同于美国的情况。 气候:冬天冷,有时下雪。
夏天几乎不下雨,但一下起来就很大。提醒约翰带雨衣、棉衣。
饮食:饮食与美国很不同,他应尽力适应中国饮食,并要学会如何使用筷子。 最后,请他带一张美国地图,希望早日能见面。
字数:100—120个词。2、(1分)日记 1今天,在学校礼堂举行了开学典礼。
2全体教师、学生出席,部分科学家和官员也参加。 3校长在讲话中希望全体师生在新的学期中再接再厉取得更大进步并宣布部分同学因 在各种竞赛中获奖而获周培源奖学金。
4三好学生受到奖励。 5著名科学家讲话,他讲述了自己的学习经验及科研成功的经验他的讲话使我深受感 动。
参考词汇: 礼堂:auditorium 奖学金:scholarship3、(1分)提示:根据以下内容写一篇日记。 1昨天与同学外出野餐,按计划要爬西山。
2早上在校门口集合7点出发。 3不久下小雨,继续骑车,一小时后到达山脚。
4雨停,爬上山顶,领略美景。 5照像,唱歌,跳跃,做游戏,下棋,午餐,玩得开心。
6午餐后下山,4点回家。筋疲力尽。
7时间5月20日,星期三。参考词汇: 野餐:picnic4、(1分)Read this telephone conversation:Lucia: I'm so glad you called me today I have a big problem I hope you can help me withClara: What's the problem I'll help if I canLucia: My cousin is ing home tonight from his trip to Europe and I'm supposed to pick him up at the airport at sevenClara: Oh Is your car giving you trouble againLucia: No I just found out I have to work late tonight Can you possibly pick him up for meClara: Sure What airline is he ing in onLucia: Pan Am Flight 607Clara: Ok But how will I recognize himLucia: Well, he's medium height And average weigh He wears glasses, and he dresses very wellClara: That could be almost everyone Can you be more specificLucia: Well, his hair is blond and curly I almost fet! He has a beardClara: What's his nameLucia: Ernic NortonClara: Okay, not problem I'll find himLucia: Thank you so much!At the last minute, Clara was unable to get to the airport She wrote her brother, Tom, a note describing Ernic so that he would be able to find him What did Clara's note say5、(1分)提示: 外籍教师Lynne任教期满准备回国,学校答应派车送她去机场。
她在临行前一天写了张便条提醒办公室李老师: 1请检查(check on)明天的车是否落实,提醒司机(remind of sth提醒某人做某事)。 2她之所以要确定一下,是因为太早不好叫出租车。
3感谢费心,并感谢一年来的关心。 4在学校一年来,生活愉快、难忘,很可能再来。
5留下一些英语书给贵校图书馆,希望对学生有用。 字数:100—120个词。
6、(1分)提示:李明的父亲在美国威斯康星大学进修。李明写信给父亲汇报自己的高考情况。
1考上自己渴望已久的北京大学。 2学校校园很美,设备良好,有一座很大的图书馆。
3教师很出色,对学生和蔼耐心。 4自己对这里的一切非常满意,决心更加刻苦学习。
5请爸爸不要为自己担心,自己已经长大了,会处理各种事情,并祝父亲身体好。 字数:约100个词。
7、(1分)根据下列内容和提示,写一篇口头通知稿。提示: 1事由:欢迎日本学生来校参观。
2参观日期:9月15日。 3参观时间:上午9:00至12:00。
4参观人数:约20人。具体安排: 19月15日上午8:45在校门口集合,欢迎来校参观的日本学生。
2带客人到接待室(reception room)开联欢会(get-together)。 3带客人参观图书馆、实验室和校办厂。
411:30和日本学生在食堂共进午餐,并互赠小礼物。 5客人在12:00左右离开学校注意: 1通知稿须包括所给要点,但不要逐条翻译。
2字数:80—100个词。8、(1分)提示: 李明在光明路一家中外合资公司买了一台电冰箱,使用半年后出现了问题。
即向公司写信要求来人修理。内容如下: 1去年我在你们商店买了一台电冰箱,外形和颜色我都很满意。
2但是,最近发现电冰箱时常发出噪音,从低到高,有时甚至停止工作。 3我们对此深感失望。
希望能尽快派人来修理。来时请打电话联系。
电话:66065531 我们将在家恭候。9、(1分)提示: 几位外国旅游者到公园的“英语角”参观。
假定你是“英语角”的负责人,请用英语准备一段介绍,内容如下: 1简况:“英语角”三年前成立,许多中学参加,至今已有几百人许多大学生和外国友 人也常光顾。 2活动内容:练习英语会话,谈论有兴趣的话题,交流学习英语的经验。
3活动时间:每周日上午。 4效果:通过参加活动学习了许多东西,对英语课堂学习是一个补充。
学生、家长、老 师都非常欢迎,认为对学英语很有帮助。如果还想了解更多,可问在场的学生。
参考词汇: 对……补充:a supplement to…10、(1分)提示: 假设由你接待一组加拿大。
下面给到大家一些模板,大家都可以运用到作文中,每一个句子都非常的不错!
一、
至于我,在某种程度上我同意后面的观点,我认为……
译:As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent I think that ____
二、
总而言之,整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样,我们才能在将来……
译:In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______Only in this way can ______in the future
三、
但是,……和……都有它们各目的优势(好处)。例如,……,而……。然而,把这两者相比较,我更顷向于(喜欢)……
译:But ____and ____have their own advantages For example,_,while Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______
四、
就我个人而言,我相信……,因此,我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……
译:Personally, I believe that__ Consequently I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______
五、
随着社会的发展,……。因此,迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量这个社会将要变得越来越好。
译:With the development of society,____So it"s urgent and necessary to____Ifevery member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better
读后续写英语情感描写方法如下:
英语读后续写应该根据前面的文章内容来进行延伸,要通读全文,读懂原文,构思情节,谋篇布局,理清逻辑,优化语言。通读全文,读懂原文。搞清楚文章的人物,时间,地点,起因,发生的事情。把文章的意是读清楚,知道文章表达的意思。
英语读后续写技巧:首先构思故事情节,谋篇布局。在了解原文的基础上,构建故事的走向,用运自己的理解,谋划故事发展的方向和结局。
最后理清逻辑,组织语言。把要继写的情节和描写的场景条理化,按照事物发展的一般规律有条有理的续写。注意逻辑思维清晰,语言表述优美,同时表达完整不产生歧义,语句要通顺,语法要正确,单词拼写正确。
1、内容
在阅卷过程中,我们发现,一部分考生没有读懂原文,如不认识bear spray,不理解a bright red cloud enveloped the animal,没有理清人物关系,误认为Paul与Mac是好朋友:这部分考生由于阅读能力直接影响到续写的发挥。
2、语言
从评卷结果来看,考生出现的问题偏向于刻意追求运用高级、新颖的词汇,强行运用复杂句型等语法结构,而忽略了与原文语言环境的符合度和连贯度。
高中英语读后续写的技巧和方法如下:
一、 得分要点
1、字迹清晰
每段首尾的字迹必须非常清楚。其实阅卷老师无论看什么作文,他的重点一般都是放在每段的首尾,首尾必须吸睛。
2、前后呼应,主题升华
有些乱七八糟八竿子打不着的就不要乱说,读后续写一般都划出了提示词,这些提示词其实都是续写的线索,必须串联使文章紧凑。但最重要的就是主题升华,弘扬人性的真善美。
3、高级词汇怎么放
读后续写的词汇得分点除了一般的名词、形容词、副词之外,最重要的是高级动词!因为续写侧重叙事,里面涉及到的人的动作是非常多的。
比如cry,这就过于简单,要侧重细节描写, to show, not to tell,高分作文一般就会写, With shoulders shivering, her tears cannot help streaming down her face她的双肩哆哆嗦嗦,眼泪情不自禁的从她脸上流下来。
所以类似表现喜怒哀乐的情况,都要事先做好准备(注意,两三句即可,但这两三句一定要是最佳句,如句式,高级词汇都要是最好的,熟记于心,一直用即可),侧重刻画描写,脸,手,眼睛都可以描写。
4、关于情节,提倡一波两折
虽说读后续写没有字数限制,但是考虑到字的大小与整体篇幅限制,一般两个波折即可,如事态变坏一个转折,最后事态好转一个转折即可。侧重人物矛盾与心理冲突,比如两人之间的猜忌,后重归于好,类似小学生作文。
二、 写作技巧
1、从原文中整理出3-5个小的情节,从中推理出续写的主要情节。情节不能自己读后凭空想象,按自己看过的小说、电视剧情节适当推理。
2、根据两个段首语来推理情节。段首语往往决定着这一整段话的走向,不可衔接不当。
3、根据关键词来推理情节发展。原文中关键词一般会在十个左右,也并不是都能用上的。有一部分关键词对于预测下面的情节是很有导向意义的,因而会在后文中用的到。
关键词中,有关于情感的连接的有关于时间的指向的,有关键句线索反复出现的,要做的,是串联前面的伏笔后面是否有所体现,前文的人物关系是否把握,以及把握后是否在续写中使矛盾凸现既而解决,这些都是决定了分数高低的因素。
一般答案是可以体现这些伏笔与连接的,如果严重偏题,首先要考虑是否读懂文章,其次,杜绝天马行空的续写,需要回归文本,不需要与标准答案一致。
但要体现前文的伏笔,线索,转折关系,这方面考察的是理解能力与阅读预判能力,需多练习以提升,加分项是主题升华,鸡汤加持无需多言。
4、根据故事需要,合理地丰富、有条理地增加一些次要的情节。比如人物的表情、动作、心理活动,细节描写等。
5、根据生活常识或者社会经验,丰富文章的细节。不可闹出不合常理的笑话。成为改卷老师紧张改卷期间的谈资。
6、平时多练习续写微作文,找到自己所能掌控的语句长度。7句20词=140词,8句20词=160词,10句15词=150词。其实续写并不是很可怕,一篇读后续写10-15句,就可以达到字数。然后分开两段,每段也就5-8句话。
7、多种句型反复练习、尝试,找到自己能够驾驭的句子类型。这样的好句可以加分不少。简单句、并列句、复合句。当然建议复合句也只是基础的复合句,无需过于复杂,有时候牵强用上反而碍事。
8、平时注意多积累记叙文、故事方面的词汇、句型和句段、丰富自己的记叙文类英语语言的材料库。考试中用出地道的英语句子,老师一定会很欣赏。
脑中先成文,落笔就一气呵成。相对简单部分,直接书写在答卷上;重点部分可以先在草稿纸上写一下,斟酌一下词句的使用,然后誊抄上去。
1、applytosbforsth为…向…申请;2、Itgoeswithoutsayingthat不言而喻;3、Ithastobenoticedthat它必须注意到;4、givesbanaccountof说明,解释;5、Astheproverbsays正如谚语所说的。
5、Whatcallsforspecialattentionisthat需要特别注意的是;6、tcanbesaidwithcertaintythat可以肯定地说;7、Asisoftenthecase由于通常情况下;8、Further,weholdopinionthat此外,我们坚持认为。
9、However,thedifficultyliesin然而,困难在;10、Ashasbeenmentionedabove正如上面所提到的…;11、Iwillconcludebysaying最后我要说;12、Inviewofthepresentstation鉴于目前形势。
13、Therefore,inmyopinion,it'smoreadvisable因此,在我看来,更可取的是…;14、Itcanbeconcludedfromthediscussionthat从中我们可以得出这样的结论;15、Frommypointofview,itwouldbebetterif在我看来……也许更好。
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