求初中英语作文中修饰名词和动词的一些好副词形容词、

副词：carefully heavily peacefully beautifully brightly well carelessly happily sadly angrily wildly

形容词 good nice peaceful dark cool sunny windy snowy small clean

形副同行 fast high slow far

高级词汇的使用

评分标准第五档次的要求中提到，“词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”。这里所说的“高级词汇”，指的是大纲中没有列入或没有识记要求，但在实际运用中却出现比较频繁的词汇，比如frustration, awkward, awfully, concern等词，都可以算作是“高级词汇”。考生若能够适当地运用一些高级词汇，定会给评卷老师留下深刻的印象。

1 I can’t find any way to solve the problem (换作高级词汇：I can’t find any solution to the problem)

2 The pet dog is so lovely that almost everybody likes her (换作高级词汇：The pet dog is so cute that almost everybody likes her)

3 The question is really difficult to understand (换作高级词汇：The question is really confusing)

4 He had to face all the possible difficulties (换作高级词汇：He had to cope with all the possible difficulties)

同义词的使用

英语中有些词的使用频率非常高，比如interesting, clever等，在表达时大家都很喜欢用，这样很容易令文章入千人一面的窘境中。但如果我们能够使用它们相应的同义词，就可以做到与众不同，给评卷者带来清新的感觉。例如：

1 It will be very interesting (换作同义词：It will be a lot of fun)

2 He was so clever that he could count all the way up to 100 at one year old( 换作同义词：He was so smart that he could count all the way up to 100 at one year old)

3 Last summer I visited New Jersey with my parents (换作同义词：Last summer I toured New Jersey with my parents)

适当利用短语取代单词

总体而言，使用短语的难度比单词要大一些，因此适当运用短语更能显出作者的功力。例如：

1 Suddenly I had a good idea (换作短语：Suddenly I came up with a good idea)

2 Take a moment to see what is happening around you (换作短语：Take a moment to see what is going on around you)

3 Everyone should do his or her best (换作短语：Everyone is supposed to do his or her best)

使用固定句式

1 She was robbed of her purse but she had no time to call for help(使用before one can do sth结构：She was robbed of her purse before she could call for help)

2 The environment will never improve until everybody takes care of it (使用倒装结构：Not until everybody takes care of it will the environment improve)

使用现在分词结构

现在分词结构可以表达伴随、原因等状语，因此几乎在任何文章中都可以用得上。现在分词短语可以使句子的表达更加简洁、生动，而且也使前后两个动作的衔接更加紧密。例如：

1 Nowadays, we can easily travel from one place to another and this bridges the gap among different races or cultures (换作现在分词短语：Nowadays, we can easily travel from one place to another, thus bridging the gap among different race or cultures)

2 People worked together on the assembly line(换作现在分词短语：People worked together on the assembly line, moving quickly and efficiently)

使用定语从句

定语从句的使用，不仅能使上下文更加流畅，也同时能充分展示写作者运用较复杂的语法结构的能力。例如：

1 My favorite living writer is Roddy Doyle I think he is a genius (使用定语从句：My favorite living writer is Roddy Doyle, who I think is a genius)

2 My aunt bought me a book The title of the book is All about USA (使用定语从句：My aunt bought me a book, whose title is All about the USA)

连接性副词

连接性副词也被称为过渡词。它们的位置一般以句首居多。连接性副词承上启下，能够令读者对后续的句子产生心理上的期待和准备，因此整个篇章会因它们而紧凑连贯。常见的连接性副词有：also, furthermore, in addition, additionally, hopefully, meanwhile, however, instead, in other words, in brief, in a word, in my opinion, on the whole等等。例如：

1 We have many things to do We believe we can finish before the day is over (使用连接性副词：We have quite a lot to do Hopefully, we will be able to finish before the day is over)

2 The boy comes from a poor family The boy does very well in his studies The boy plans to work his way through college (使用连接性副词：Even though he comes from a poor family, the boy does very well in his studies; furthermore, he plans to work his way through college)

使用从属连词

常见的从属连词有after, as, when, while, as long as, as soon as等。例如：

1 You work hard and never give up You will succeed in your studies (使用从属连词：So long as you work hard, you will succeed in your studies)

2 The teacher came in the students were quiet (使用从属连词：The students were quiet as soon as the teacher came in)

体裁和题材对得性的要求

不同体裁和题材的文章有不同的用语要求。比如，书面通知中就不适合用“I will tell you a piece of good news”或“May I have your attention, please”等句子。这些句子只有在口头通知中才算得体的语句。

2003年高考的书面表达要求“你”给一位外国朋友回信，介绍“你”帮他找的一套出租房。相当一部分考生没有理解“你”与说话对象的关系，所以话语中没有给对方提出异议的余地，叙述的方式和口吻上缺乏礼貌性，像“The house is very suitable for you”等语句显得相当主观，若改为“Do you think it is suitable for you If not, I will try again”就比较得体。

另外， 英语中还有正式语和非正式语，书面语和口头语之分。写作前，还应该认真分析题目的体裁，根据不同的体裁，确定用语的类别。正式用语或书面语的句子结构严格遵循语法规则，所采用的单词使用频率不是很高，比如：permit, inform, discover, depart等词都属于正式用语；而非正式用语或口头用语则较多地使用短语，所采用的单词使用频率高，也比较短。比如let, tell, find out, leave等等。费正式用语也经常使用简略语或缩略词。

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